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Flow of the City Streets

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A leaf drifts along the dirty gutter,
Meandering aimlessly with the trash,
But carried away by the cool breeze
In the infinite flow of the Earth.

Nameless street signs lie ahead,
And the road diverges in thousands of directions‭;
The leaf mingles with the lingering sewage
And the scattered lumps of stray leaves,
Which once descended from varying trees,
Unified now by their vapid vagrancy.

The leaf is trampled by a stampede of feet,
Its limp,‭ ‬crushed body still floating away,
With forlorn faces beholding it indifferently
And passing by with lackadaisical eyes,
Bespectacled by gray-lensed glasses of sanity,
Atop heads driven hastily by instinctual legs.

The sky overhead conjures overcast clouds
As the leaf embraces mother Earth's benign apathy‭;
Dirge from a lonely man's saxophone fouls the calm air,
Nebulous with city haze and dully rising smoke‭;
The leaf,‭ ‬stumbling into rainbow-colored litter,
Is pushed further onwards by the brotherly wind.

The street on which the leaf blindly journeys
Drains the passions of passerby into swirling cesspools
And heartfelt desires are swept under black tires
Of beastly cars which recede into nothingness,
Leaving a swoosh which knocks the leaf astray
And a resounding feeling of emptiness
From which the grimy,‭ ‬cracked sidewalk trembles.

Continuing on its beaten and fickle path
On the fringes of the bustling sidewalk,
The leaf flies away in the windy,‭ ‬dark night,
The stars obscured by the city's effusion of pollution
Neon lights effervescing in the vacant storefronts,
Acquiescing to the invitation of the worldly flow.‭
This is a poem I wrote about drifting along in life without purpose and the consequential emptiness and alienation that accompanies that lack of meaning, using the allegory of a leaf drifting along the city streets.

Is the imagery effective and does it evoke certain feelings? Can you picture it in your mind? Are the themes fairly comprehensible?
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Emmysarus's avatar
The introduction to this poem:
”A leaf drifts along the dirty gutter,
Meandering aimlessly with the trash,
But carried away by the cool breeze
In the infinite flow of the Earth.”

Is one of the best introductions I have read in a while, I love the sheer honesty in it and can completely see the connection between the leaf and a wondering person. I like how you mention its different cycles of the lead; being trod on by feet, uniting with other leaves and falling into a rainbow of litter, all very good metaphors. You have good creativity and know exactly how to express this through literature!